Ok for the 1st seed battling the 16th seed, this was damn close. First of all, Sureal, your verse had a great beginning, but it was predictable and dull. I think that you probably keyed this, and got stuck as to where to go. A2Z, your beginning sucked, but I liked your ending, very well writteb. Beginning nothing much, but I loved the last half.

So I am faced with a decision... I am going to abstain for the time being...I know that sucks, but I'm going to have to think on this one...sorry


EDITED: Ok I thought this over, and it took me a good long time to figure out what made who's verse better. Sureal's was more organised, and wasn't as jumpy. A2Z, I told you about your beginning, the reason I didn't like it was because it jumped from subject to subject in the beginning, and was hard to follow. Sureal's, wasn't jumpy, and followed a good plot, so...

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