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Old 07-08-03, 09:48 AM   #9
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From: ScarBorouGh
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yo, it's how you started wording your lines, they don't flow as well as they used to, well maybe that, or your bar length is too stagered, 'cause it was all the flow fuckin' this one up.. like you have some real short bars and some real long ones throughout..

"this isn't directed to anyone except those who take it offensively-a loss comes extencively-
i prostitute my raps cause it will cost you to try and fuck with me-
got togeather with B.R.E-".... <-- see what I mean

"aint what you potray-or what you display-
you an actor-
thinking you drop math ,you and mics are barely a fraction of a factor"<---- there too... I mean it flowed a'ight, but it could be alot better, ... that's what I think your problem is..

that and your throwin' out all these odd ball words that need to be strugled to spit on flow or keep time, ... that's my half assed break down.. 1 peace
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