Shiznit's Thoughts:

WOW!...very very very touching piece..i would even wanna hear it on audio....


VOCABULARY

>not too much but u used intellectual words that made this verse unique...those words like "rotating door", "global conquest", "complacent"....those just made the vocabs soo intense...nicely done!


FLOW

>definitely perfect...like i said..i definitely wanna hear it on audio cuz when i was readin it im kinda like thinking of how would the beat go and everything and its quite good...i mean like every word perfectly fits every beat....simple as that...


WORDPLAY

>good imagery and metas...like the "HOckey Sack"...that was really good...hmm...some words just came out emotionally strong...tight!


CONTENT

>feelin it ....ahhhhhh absolutely...it was like some kind of hypnotism that those words would actually make u think of people and the whole world mentality nowadays...the emotions were definitely refracted somethings that made this piece really interesting and intriguing to read....

OVERALL

>madd good piece...i loved it!

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