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Originally posted by BlUnT-MC
I stopped reading after money... this was wack, you can tell you never even held a gun b4 by the way you goin' about this piece...
"im gonna kill an inocent guy all i care is the money/
this kill reminds me of my first shootin at a bunny/".....
^ shooting a human is a lot different feeling then shooting a rabbit man, trust me... even if the man doesn't die..
"Unscrew the silencer, empty the magazine, take out the empty case/
climb down the ladder chuck my bag in & drive away drive like a race/"...
^why would you empty the magazine if you're packing it up, and the "casing" which is the right term, comes out automatically with the recoil.. unless you're using a WWII isued rifel or somethin'.. lol...
and also, even if it was just an imaginative piece, your vocab and flow were way off... the flow made the vocab seemed forced.. even in the two lines I just quopted, it's real choppy, you need some elevation... not say'n you suck or ne-thing but try to work on a few things
peace
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Okay ye the rhyme was pretty shit, flow was choppy & simplistic vocab & i know i can do better BUT Ive held gauges & rifles & to say when u shoot things u feel diffrently, wen i shoot clay piogens or live prey, i always feel the same. & to be honest you way of with that WW2 rifle crap cuz if ur using a bolt action u gotta pull back to let the empty cartrage out IE using an Accuracy Internationl Artic Warfare Magnum Sniper rifle or a Steyr Scout. the sniper rifle i am talking about
IS NOT an automatic one such as the SIG 550 like u are on about. Also he would empty the magasine so you can get ur unused bullets back its called hitting your target. So before you start talkin big with ur Little Gun knowledge dont come here cuz i know quiet abit about guns.
so i guess what im sayin here is. is dont try & make me look dumb tryna think u know alot about guns wen its obvious u know pretty much jack shit, go & show off to all 8 year olds in your area abhout "the Vast Gun Knowledge" that you have.