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Old 07-08-03, 03:44 PM   #8
Taktik
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Fatal Executives Representative Presents.........LOOK OUT BELOW

I spit verbs~to~break~herbs, I strait~urge~you~make~sure, that before you make~yours, you learn~to~evade~words//1
Learn to embrace~hurt, verse~after~verse dispurt, you frantically open ya rhyme book, make sure your 'Microsoft "works"'//2(pre-wrote)
My metaphors metamorph to textual dinosaurs, they rip through ya letters like flesh, tearin' up ya 'beef' like rapid carnivores//3
Bleedin~gore, punches make your teeth~no~more, you can't rap 'tuff' you'd need to 'freeze~an~apple' to rap 'hard~CORE'//4
Fatal Executives sworn, wit a mic~n~keys in hand when I was born, i'm 'on-top' of your 'lines' like standing on a 'prisoner~in~uniform'//5(lined shirts??)
This shit I spit is twister~formed, flyin~cows and farms~deformed, this verse like a 'hurricane' here's the i of my 'storm'//6(eye)
you rhymes~a~flop, 'fumble' lines to drop, you wouldn't even get a 'stage~cordinator' to give your rhymes 'props'//7


i wasn't sure if these were either long lines or bars so I just made 7.........let the voting begin
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