I Pop A Quiz To The Lord How Is That Angel Sent To Us?..
I Will Guide The Great Through This, Especially…Omega Genesis…

I liked how you ended this, although i really think if you went back through it and touched up a couple areas you would had a really nice spit here. I like how you ended the entire thing wit omega genesis, that in itself i find exceptionally powerful, but the ryhme itself could be reworked n reworded to give it a tighter flow. I see what you saying about not wantin to touch somethin pure, from emotions, it's true gods sense of astethics seems to be buried knee deep in imperfections, but in my opinion when it comes to lyrics or atleast as far as rap lyrics go perfection is key, you gotta have perfect cadence, perfect voice control, n perfect lines otherwise it sounds half ass, and a half ass rap lyric is more like spoken word garbage n poetry (really it's not all garbage but i care not for it). and that belongs in somebody elses culture, we ain't no fuckin beatniks here. LOL besides that this is pretty dope, I like seeing people bend the imagination to stretch reality n distort perspectives keep it up.

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