deep, more poetic than ne-thing... it was a good piece, flowed alright, but to a real soft rythm... vocab was lacking a-bit, but this type of piece usually does... good work still fam, 1


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lol I ain't know this was poetry... lmao, a'ight.. so I was right when I said it was more poetic than anything.. lol, stay up dun.. 1

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