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Old 07-09-03, 05:35 AM   #4
Black.Jack
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Aight, Verbal Rapist, U Got This As U Would Have Thought

Better Flow And Structure, Big Time
Better Punches N Well Thought Shit, Nice Stuff In There

Both of you, just needa work on uppin ya vocabs, way ta do that, keep droppin ya shit, verbal u not as much, u almost there man, keep it up

Shadow, u needa work on ur structure, and ur flow, aka. its gotta roll smoothly. Try gettin sum more complexity in ya pieces as well

Good Job Both Of Ya

VERBAL GETS POLL VOTE

Hit dis up dawg, bit of a merkin on the cat by me but oh well, a fair vote is needed

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8899#post608899