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The Search - This Verse Was Nice, Started The Piece Off Well, It Had Some Good MUlti's And Vocab!

The Find - This Was To Me, The Best Verse. It Had Some Mad Imagry, The Flow Was Tight, However You Had One Or Two Weak lines:
"Time Slows Down And I Begin Feeling Like My Lifes A Football Replay To Show A Close-Call.., Wasn't Really feeling That One! But You Came Back With This Bar:
I Begin Wondering What Hes Thinking..Does This Man Opposite Of Me Have A Family?..
..Can-It-Be That Hes Not The Enemy But Just Like Me And We’re Just Victims Of Political Instanity!

The Shot - Was really Feeling This Verse! You Had Brutal Imagry And Emotion! The Flow Was Ill, Mostly Because You Had 2 Or 3 Words Rhyming IN A Line !
My Index On Violently Shaking On The Trigger As I Continued To Line Up The Shot..
..For A Few Nanoseconds My Conscience Debated It..But Give In? No My Nationalism Would Not.. - That Bar KIlled The Whole Verse! Tight.

Overall: 8.5/10, Was Tight, Could'nt Really See Anywhere To IMprove It. LIke The Way You Structure It, Really Blending IN With The Subject!