I'm more of a producer than MC, so I'm checkin the beat first, they're ok, nothing out of the norm. Nothing to set you apart from the rest of the people tryin to make it. The lyrics need more soul in the delivery. Sounds like you guys are nerds, or just plan ole reading it as you go.

I respect the effort though, because a lot of these chumps don't know the amount of effort it takes to record, let alone record decent.