Thread: God's Plan???
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Old 07-09-03, 03:19 PM   #2
RythmicTendicies
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Theres Alot Of "God" Topic Pieces Going Around: Wish A2Z Had Never Started That Thread..lol! j/k

Rhyming/Flow
Was O.k, Some It It Was pretty Basic, YOu Used "ya" Most OfThe Time Thought,,Could Have Been Better.Flow Was Pretty Tight, You had A few Multi's In there too!...5/10

Vocab/Wordplay
This Was Rather Simplistic, Try To Expand You Vocab A Bit, However You Had Some Good Wordplay in Some PLaces..IMprove This.... 3/10

Concept/Topic
This Rather Confused Me, You Only Had 2 or 3 At The Most, Lines That Actually Related To the Topic! You Were PLaying The Gangsta Image A bit..As far As I Could See Most Of It Was About Someone Being Sent To Prison Under "psychiatric 'supervision", Not Much to Do With Gods Plan...But anyway..... 3/10

Overall
4/10....Could Have Been Alot Better, Up You Vocab, Add Multis To help the Flow!
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