Rhyming/Flow
This Was Weak, Most Of it Didn't Rhyme, And The Flow Was North-Sea-On-a-Windy-Day Choppy! Add Some Multis In!You Used It And Me Alot, try To Expand Your Rhyming Capabilities....2/10


Vocab/Wordplay
In Some PLaces You had Some Decent Vocab:It's real intricate, try to understand the complexity// - that line! But Up It A Little bit....5/10

Concept/Topic
Wasn't That Sure On The Topic, I Was Kinda Confused About
it...Shed Some Light: 3/10

Overall
Was Kinda Weak, But You Will Elevate, Don't Think I'm Giving You Negative Feedback Cos I'm A Hater, I Want You To improve, Catz Comments Helped Me Alot When I Was A newb....3.5/10