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Old 07-09-03, 04:37 PM   #3
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U-nderestimated lyrical colnel, of the rhymer's journal, heat in the heart, know as the burnin inferno...

that was a nice line, I liked the concept alot, although it was kinda unlcear at some points as to what it was you were talking about or referring to nah mean, but thats art. My only real problem wit it is that I couldn't pick up on the cadence and thats a definate problem. Keep spittin n practicin as soon as you get that flow in check holla at me.

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