SLiK's Thoughts......

Too-Easy----Yes, i was reading yours and i was like damn, good fo a newb, Very good. Stayed right there on topic, BUT you fell of in the end. Try workin on it man, Its ight. You had some pretty good Punches, they coulda been alittle harder. I was feelin yo flow. Overall, Ima have to give you a 5/10 fo da spit. Props.

NappZ----Came off strong in the beginning and damn was I feelin yo flow. Punches were strong and deep. Personals, eh, didnt really see to many, but not that it REALLY matters. Wordplay, NICE. Creativeness, very good. I was feelin the interest in this. I read the whole thing and kept wanting to hear more. Overall Grade: 9/10

Final Vote- NappZ