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The Ultimate Weapon
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IP:
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Originally posted by Black.Jack
Aight, Verbal Rapist, U Got This As U Would Have Thought
Better Flow And Structure, Big Time
Better Punches N Well Thought Shit, Nice Stuff In There
Both of you, just needa work on uppin ya vocabs, way ta do that, keep droppin ya shit, verbal u not as much, u almost there man, keep it up
Shadow, u needa work on ur structure, and ur flow, aka. its gotta roll smoothly. Try gettin sum more complexity in ya pieces as well
Good Job Both Of Ya
VERBAL GETS POLL VOTE
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i agree with him^ and verbal here is a tip
stop uppin or you'll get disqualified....the max is 5 ups
aight...just tryin to save you
props to both
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