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Old 07-09-03, 06:37 PM   #8
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Originally posted by Black.Jack
Aight, Verbal Rapist, U Got This As U Would Have Thought

Better Flow And Structure, Big Time
Better Punches N Well Thought Shit, Nice Stuff In There

Both of you, just needa work on uppin ya vocabs, way ta do that, keep droppin ya shit, verbal u not as much, u almost there man, keep it up

Shadow, u needa work on ur structure, and ur flow, aka. its gotta roll smoothly. Try gettin sum more complexity in ya pieces as well

Good Job Both Of Ya

VERBAL GETS POLL VOTE



i agree with him^ and verbal here is a tip
stop uppin or you'll get disqualified....the max is 5 ups
aight...just tryin to save you
props to both
peace
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