Shiznit's Thoughts:


VOCABULARY

>damn ...u used like the awesomest words...no one couldve done it better than u...the fact that u combined simplistic words with restructured glances of captured terminology..thats just basically brilliant!...

FLOW

>the hook made it more irreplaceable..like its made to be there...teh first time i read it i was feelin an audio coming then i heard it...its definitely exceptional...beats are alright tho..props for that

WORDPLAY

>nice played words like u amuse urself with it...the metas and multis are definitely enough to make the piece participate within each words and flow alltogether..just one thing tho...some words are missing but i cant think right now so ill just leave it like that..hehe

CONTENT

>typical but subliminal approach made this even better...i liked how the way u put emotions then one thing would refracted one way or another...its quite amusing..and i liked readin this a lot...

OVERALL

>another one from you....damn!>..thats cool...i like readin stuff from you...very nice...keep em droppin!

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