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Heh, i'm here, i'm here...
..getting too old, harder to get around, walking stick required, slower...ya know?!
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So nicely put. Sweet, cute yet also a bit more than that. It had a kind of moving depth. Imagery used was so nice too. I got no criticism for this piece, because it's dedicated to someone and it's one that is so heartfelt (or so it seems). And well, what flaws can one pick out for a piece like this
...but yeah, nice to see Trinity has linked herself up with a writer such as yourself. Could be an explosive combination writing wise (and otherwise too i guess..)...
..resp..
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