definately goes to knuckle. Petra you need to make your stuff more complex, basically you had a lot of filler. You notice how Knuckles punches and personals hit way harder even though he keyed his shit, you need to read elite battles and learn how to make hard hitting punches instead of stuff like:
"hey knucklehead when i tell you this you gonna cry//
but you winning record is about to become a tie//"
you see that isnt even a punch, it is filler, shit, all it did was make me cringe to see this in elite. You just keep elevatin and my advice is to check all the stickys in frontlines and in the wackness emergency center for threads on battlin basics. That is how i learned to battle in 4 days. Just tryin to give a rookie some advice aight, peace.

hit this up 4 me aight: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=62142