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Old 07-11-03, 05:10 PM   #2
shiznit
Tampons are expensive
 
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ok wait. why the hell am i reading this again??

*scratches head*

alright..this doesnt make sense at all...

First off your words are defnitely not good...how the way u structured it doesnt support one another....its like a whole twisted cliched drop...i mean regardless of the ".." and !! and the '....' goin on....nothing really comes up in my head when i read that...

secondly...hmmm...the whole content really bugged me ..i mean some words didnt even coincide with one another...it kinda confusin and i dont really get what u want to say...u may think im stupid cuz i think stupid ppl doesnt understand this...and you used like tons of like 'Barry Sanders' ...like "G. Coleman'......bunch of ppl...

but hey...we still elevatin tho...if u put these words together and put them in a more constructive way of executing ur words and verses....you would be fine...
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