Shiznit's thoughts:

VOCABULARY

>no one can pull this shit out better than you...i mean damn...well thought out vocabs...uve executed ur terms soooo unreachable...deep simple with a touch of complexity determined how talented u are. i liked how u contructed such creative words. nice!
>not enough multis but man the metas are great and the whole imagery going on made this piece stood out from the rest....word play was really good too...


FLOW

>PERFECT...i read it 4 times already...and i think it fitted the whole verse incredibly brilliant....it seems like im actually the speaker of these when i read it out loud...i really really liked this a lot!

CONTENT

>damn..i really got a lot of something to say about this i mean...the whole concept of the piece awed me im not surprised tho cuz all of your drops here definitely awed me big time..i meant there's this thing about ur writing that makes me feel like all emotional and shit...really really good!...the imagery caught my eyes.. THe beginning made me read furthermore...much respect for that..i love it


OVER ALL

>fantastic!...

Moral:
except in my mind, I surprise myself to find
that there were no pictures and no wall
this was my emotional downfall
You can never know what I do
images don't matter, there was only you


^^^ see what i mean...???...really good..!

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