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Re: ...-Your Shit Talkin Ends Now-....
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hell of a nice battle and you both came hard as hell reppin your crews so im going to give a full breakdown
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Originally posted by BROOKLYN
No More Hidin, I 'Disfigure You'..Now I Got You 'Scared Of Your Own Skin' Like Pores Fighting/
Man I Don't Have To 'Look For Some Background' To See This Herb Is A 'Whore Risin'/(Horizon)
nice creativity & wordplay, not that direct
You A Misses Bitch, The Clips I Spit Open You Up And Lay You Out Like Christmas Gifts/
Been Equipped To Diss, Holdin Fifths To Rip That Aim At You, And Leave You Painted Dude Like Acrylics Bitch/
lol good comedy punch
Careful Kid, Punches Might Snap Skin, Why You Keep Rappin? I 'Stamp' Your Weak Words..Leave Your 'Post' Flattened/
Mental Knows Im Tight, Despite Your Actions, Bitch I Hate Strips..But 'Your Comical Readings' Are Where I'm Leavin My Caps In/(Captions)
again nice wordplay but could have been rephrased better maybe
Your Brain Is Stalling, Brooklyn Shove Your Next L(Nextel) Into Your Ear To Show You Pain Is Calling!/
This Kid Claim He Balling..But Your 'Primitive And On The Run' Kid Your 'Ape Hauling'/(Applauding)
good multi, it connected well
Bitch I'm Smokin You, And Punches 'Leave The Inside Of This Pussy' Falling Open Too/(Fallopian Tube)
Your Speech Is Hopeless, Can't Compete With Dopeness, It's Like I'm 'Breakin Cameras' The Way I Breach Your Focus/
lmao damn that punch really caught
I Peel Skin Like Bananas In The Hands Of Monkeys..Ya Rhymes Wouldn’t Be Dope If They Came Engraved On Heroin Junkies/
You Could Actually Win..Nah I Must Be Mistaken It..I'll Have You Waving 'White Flags' Like ' K.K.K. Patriots'/
the 1st line was kinda played but you picked it up with that last line & made it hot
The Show Is Owned And Mental Is Shattered, Like Old Men's Bladder, You Can Barely Hold Ya Own/
Bruisin You Too, Where Loosing This Dude..I Got Your Whole Crew On The Move Like Mobile Homes/
lol, nice wordplay
You Act In Amazement That Your Plays Bent, I Strike Back Swiftly To Leave Your Back On The Pavement/
Refract Your Placement, It Happens So Often You Must Think My Dick In Your Mouth Is A Fashion Statement/
 that last line was off the hook
First Hit, I Put You In A Hearse Quick, You Can Put 'Swearwords' On Paper And Still Not Be Able To Write 'Cursive'/
You Could Be A 'Blood' Member And Couldn’t Call 'Cells' If I Lend My 'Spleen', Your Verse Couldn’t 'Outshine' Mines If I 'Dimmed My Screen'/
You'll Be Blessed To Breathe, Throw A 'Test' At Me?..If You Is Bold, I Fill In Ya Crew With Holes Like The 'S-A-T'S!/
nice with crew diss part
Mental Is As Dumb As It Gets, Ya Punches Never Seem To Connect Like Silly Rabbits And Trix/
Who Scared To Post First?, Bitch I'll 'Wear You Out', Like Kids With Only 'One Pair of Kicks'/
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i think the verse could have been directed to the crew more than him but overall i give the verse a 6.3
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Originally posted by Mental Stamina
This Kid clamin he a con but he only a Wack-Delinqwent,
Attack-Sequent, he like pressured thugs only pull the Mac-Frequent!
nice wordplay but could have been rephreased
Clamin you comin hard like spys on a mission,
Like Drunks aimin guns kid gon die While-He-Missin!
i didn't actually catch the wordplay in this
Mental is timin errors and im Clockin-Your-Flaws,
Mockin-Your-Raw, im sendin armed trojans heavy equipped with Dicks-Knockin-Your-Jaw!
lmao funny ass line yo
Mental tossin bombs like playin with Hand-Grenades,
Ill flame up ya iris while sprayin u up with Cans-Of-Raid!
nice wordplay sort of
Ghosts taunting-your-spine while spirits haunting-ya-mind,
Brooklyn is addicted to Crack cuz this kid really wanting The-Lines! (he did 21 lines - max is 20)
that was played because i see alot of lines about crack
You aint pressin the keys like blind men disabling-explosives,
Mental the presidental congress the way im relabling-notives!
brooklyn loves it HardCore he already been Beaten four times,
Ya throat-greetin-knifes, I dont go down south but ive eaten-wives!
nice consistency, cold have been more direct
Spits will leave you Top-less puttin your Brain-In-The-Cold,
Im Breakin Your Heart kid like Grimreepers when Staining-Your-Soul!
nice wordplay in there
Mental like a giving salesman im always Getting-my-Portion,
Im known for Killing Kidz and Murkin Suns like I was splitting-an-orphan!
that line caught my eye, very hot
I cause death when I write amored spits that cant be Grazed-with-Infections,
When Mental Stamina start to Spill Heat I leave ya Journal Pages Blazed-In-Sections!!!
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i think that verse could have been directed towards brooklyn & the crew more alsom you had nice wordplay i was feeling but you both were sort of even but i think brooklyn took it because of punches in every line, stamia had nice consistency but it didnt match up to brooklyns punches |