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Old 07-11-03, 07:06 PM   #21
Symilee
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16 minutes is all i need to finish this...heres a little keystylin for you Raz............................no pre-writtin here


These rhymes slice through ur chest like a sword, ur verse must be a 2 by 4 cuz it makes me lyrically “board” (bored) :: got you with words that come in perfect accord, pound you into the ground so much you couldn’t get more “floored” // 1
For your own sake, take your skills and forsake em, cuz im takin ur rhymes and squeezing em like a grape :: rake up this win to shut this bitch’s face, my rhymes leave you so paranoid you’ll be “sleeping awake” // 2
Show no fear when I kill this queer, don’t look at Solar directly cuz ill leave ya retina seared :: you got no moves left, got you crackin tears, your fag ass should go back to ur homosexual video career // 3
You couldn’t create a “buzz” if you were a saw, metaphorically murderin u raw and exposin ur greatest flaws :: got this cat verbally “de-clawed,” spit spiteful clauses that cause time to pause, cuz my lyrcials are beyond physical and spiritual laws // 4
Im spittin miracles like I was lyrically blessed, got you to confess due to the stress of this battle test, I can attest to ur lyrical mess :: I haven’t even flexed half my skill pecs, rip your lips into tiny bits to leave you speech-less // 5
Wreckin Raz radically like I was Taz is my latest fab, this retard thought “keystylin” was when I dress up my keypad :: Got this bitch ticked, put him on my latest “merkin” tab, he couldn’t come up with a “solution” to his rhyme problems if he was a science lab // 6

vote on best verse.....peace.
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