Rhyming/Flow
I Thought The Flow Was pretty Weak, It Was Choppy In Alot Of Places, BUt here Were A few Bars Where It Flowed Smoothly!...6/10

Vocab/Wordplay
No Doubt Here About Your Vocab Abilities, Brutal. You Had good Wordplay Too, "Tryin to stop it or at least begin to come to a compromise,
My compromise fails my works simply grow way to deep,"....8/10

Concept/Topic
Yea, You Stuck With The Topic Throught, "Inspiration" - Good Topic...8/10

Overall
7/10, It wasMad Dope, But the Flow Could Have Been Better, Also This Piece Could Have Been Made LOnger..but...Keep It Up!