Rhyming/Flow
You Rhyming Abilities At teh Stage Seem Restricted! Try To use Multi's(look in the WEC for tutorials), They Help The Flow, Which Does Need Some Help...2/10

Vocab/Wordplay
Almost Non-existant, You had Some Decent Vocab, But It Came
and Went...2/10

Concept/Topic
This Was The Best Section You Succeded In, In Some PLaces You Had Good Emotion - "of rage fire in my vains", That May Have Been Basic, But Thats They Kinda Stuff That Helps You Elevtae, Put Emotion, Passion n' Rage Into It..you KNow? ... 5/10

Overall
Was Above Average For a newb, I Liiked The Way You Didn't Portray A Gangsta Image, Which IS So Commen Amoungst Newbs...3/10.....Add Multi's, Expand Your Vocab...Hope To See You Elevatin And Droppin' more Shit Soon!