both crew.....Props to both of u...but i see this totally different.i thought both stories could have been played out better....(just my opinion)....Add i liked yours but i thought it just came out very simple....(remeber its only an opinion) 13 alot better vocab and the way u put your rhymes in....and i thought the story was justa bit better than add so this I say...

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