aight....it sounded ok and all that....its a good subject....but u shuda been able to do it better than that....like...that was some "skit" shit.....or maybe a hook.....but it coulda been better....

dont get me wrong..u were creative and all....using the number 50 all the way thru...but u coulda filled it out with Multies and word plays....some punchlines would be dope....jus think of the punchlines you'd get dissin 50....

anyway.....i aint a 50 hater and all....but then again...i wudnt jump to stop any bullets hittin him either....

anyway....yall check my shit now...."Cash Stripped"....peace