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Originally posted by fgee
Wickedness is spilled and left there for Cameron to absorb
If defeat was a cure, then its obvious you’ll never be ill on this board
^reasonable opener
Fill in this Void, Votes are coming up short like midgets in abortion clinics
played^
Critics? This is fence text, The way I look at your rhymes and Picket..
decent wordplay alright punch^
Rip threw you spirits I don’t understand your point so I’m missing the view
Trifes executes flows of an epidemic that doctors wouldn’t pursue
^not really feelin that
You’re a waste slut, like hookers your verse is used and aged much
^played hooker shit
Split acres and build crops enslave Cameron, battle locked and chained up
^hmmmm
Extract of egg yolks the way I beat you, and batter this fool
^good
I’ll salvage your crew, and treat you like waste and dispose of you 2
^alright
If text is a skill you’ve developed then by god help us all from ruining our eyes
No one wants to read you pre-writs Cameron, we can read between your lines
^decent finisher
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Camerons verse....
Trife's job is to relieve "stress" in guys pants like a homosexual tailor
^played....blah
This dude is only in front cuz his rhymes lead.... to failure
^nice
You trying to be something you're not, we know your faking the funk
That's why I "crush you in my sleep" like fat guys on the top bunk
^wasnt feeling it
You couldn't win in this battle if there was d/r voting
Trife you couldn't get a hot sig (cig) if you took up smoking (wtf "taking a leap")
^not feeling that at all
someone musta "pulled the cotton over your eyes" cuz after reading ya sig
It's clear you must be blinded "like your fitted's too big"
^decent
You will never have the "lead" in this "play" on words
The only time "you do something" with words is when you use "verbs" (verbs are doing words)
^nice
You can't beat me Trife, ya words are pure fiction.
^blah
This aint a bragging tourny, you gotta work on ya dissin
The only reason ya rhymes are "def" is cuz no-one listening
^alright finish
overall i gotta go with Trife on this...had better punches and nice flow to go
cam had some highlights in his verse but not enough
trife was more consistent
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word. although Cameron you have elevated immensely since you first started...keep at it |