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Originally posted by Lyricali
Both pieces were filled with the monotonous punches I read daily on RB. . Personals, flow, punches, wordplay all could have been better. There was one particular line that stuck out to me.
That pretty much decided it for me. Nice creativity and a Class A punch. Both of you have some work to do and I recommend not waiting to the last minute to post up. . There's nothing wrong with posting early in the week, in fact, it'll be an advantage. .
VOTE: fgee
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^^nice explanation...THOG lacked punches and the ones that he did throw werent directed at Fgee. |