hmmm...this is tough decision

Bribe: Your verse told a lot of stories, and every story had a lot of nice wordplay. I was really feelin every verse. My favourite was the soldier, because it seemed the realest. I disliked the Nas line in one of the verses, can't remember which it was in.

Evolve: Your story was strange. I could envision the beatings, which is unusual in abuse pieces because they're usually too emotional for good imagery. Maybe it's because I just watched a lot of violent movies lol. Well, you had some nice wordplay, and I liked how it was a son-mother relationship at the beginning. Very Nice.

vote-Evolve.
I was just feelin his verse more, and he seemed to have every aspect in there. Dope verses though, bribe.
Peace

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