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Old 07-13-03, 12:18 AM   #12
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nice battle. people have gone from abuse stories to hell stories. this league comes in phases lol.

Addlibb: Originality was off the hook. I would never have seen that storyline for "the poorest man" and I think that was really dope. Your flow was off, and you didn't seem to take much time with wording, there wasn't much wordplay either. It was still nice tho.

13-damn. You had some really nice imagery, and some cool wordplay, but I'm still trying to figure out why Jesus would visit hell. Were you on crack? lol, just playin man. I liked the riches to rags theme, and I liked your description of how evil the dude was.

vote-Addlibb
The originality took it.
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