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nice battle. people have gone from abuse stories to hell stories. this league comes in phases lol.
Addlibb: Originality was off the hook. I would never have seen that storyline for "the poorest man" and I think that was really dope. Your flow was off, and you didn't seem to take much time with wording, there wasn't much wordplay either. It was still nice tho.
13-damn. You had some really nice imagery, and some cool wordplay, but I'm still trying to figure out why Jesus would visit hell. Were you on crack? lol, just playin man. I liked the riches to rags theme, and I liked your description of how evil the dude was.
vote-Addlibb
The originality took it.
Peace
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she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis
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