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Old 07-13-03, 01:28 AM   #1
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the essence of my presence is an extention of my mind/the electric connections plant conceptions in time/introspective reflections show me to climb/while you slowly decline/my prophetic perceptions keep me sublime/mile a minute mind time keeps on movin'/so tell me once again what makes you think im human/for you naieve robots this is your only conclusion/ im more like a fusion of mind and machine/i fell from the sun and im blinding the scene/rewinding time and dividing the seas/ripping the seams and finding my means/while your hiding in trees ,denying your dreams/im shining and rhyming like veteran emcee's/who chanell energies, and synergy/i spit imagery to display mental purity in perfect symetery/ lyrically and spiritualy,it's clear to me,you lack clarity/clouded concepts connect less than rarely/merrily,merrily life is but a dream/it's rarely played fairely/it's up hill and up stream like it or lump it hit me back
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