^agrees about the deadline
if it had been some wack cat then they wouldnt have been allowed to drop late..double standards
anyway this is my breakdown
T=....ur verse was dope and very original in its concept
nice to read regardless of what folks said....i found it fairly easy to grasp what it was about...well told and some nice imagery

Sand....again a dope verse....good original stuff as well
very nice structure and great word play and imagery as well through out
like the ending alot too
so overall i gotta vote for SAND