okay...lemme break it down...nobody does this on battles anymore? damn...

Gizmo-Your punches were alright...the father line was kinda played souns like something a little white kid would say *cough*sol*cough*... your closer was pretty good...I can say I was feeling that.

GodOfWhiteRap-Your had NO wordplay. None. Your rhyme scheme was cool, but your punches were weak, and there wasn't any attempt at wordplay and metas.

vote-gizmo
the wordplay got it.
Peace

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