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damn, sleepy people.
well, libby, you got a dope piece right here. I couldn't feel the flow without a beat, but this thing had constant rhyming and multies, so it was dopeness at it's best to read.
I don't know if you know shit about all those places, but you made it all fit together well.
I didn't like the war thing at the end, it seems tha regime does that to people. Adding violence and bullshit in. Well, you do it with style, T, so it's all good.
You didn't have very much imagery, but there wasn't much room for it either.
Nice piece dude.
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