you have flow, and stick to topic, but gangsta rap's only really good 4 a laugh, there is a deeper side to it, but shit like I got hommies amd I got nines... dawg, no-one cares, I got a snub 22 an' a baretta 9 mill, pluss a mad crew, but you wont find that shit in most my raps, 'cause no-one cares as I said.... other than that work on your vocab an' your topic structure... peace, peep my shit..

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