cool, i like what you were tryin to do here. i think it halfway feel off at the "fuck this shit" line. cause it was all on topic about peace but then it was like you caved in. but i did like how you brought it back togather in the last verse with the "we're all the same" line. nice post. keep rappin about the stuff other people stay away from. well except B.E.P.

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""Accustomed to trample on the rights of others, you have lost the genius of your own independence and become the fit subjects of the first cunning tyrant who rises among you." --Abraham Lincoln, speech, September 11, 1858