I gotta go with Rory Breaker on this...

The other guy had some very complex stuff, but none of it really hit very hard.
I mean...the first line he used all that scientific lingo, but killed the punch line by going elementary with "ass-kicked"
Same with the "hydrogen bomb" bar...all that scientific shit and what was the punch in there?
"make ya body fry" (simple)
And the whole "lyrical assassin" bar was advice, not a diss.

Rory made his stuff hit and made it funny to read with amusing metas and wordplay.

I liked it.

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