uppin

somebody please tell me the parts that you didnt like so i can improve. hell i dont care if you tell me you hated it all if you give a good reason and i can grow off of it.

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""Accustomed to trample on the rights of others, you have lost the genius of your own independence and become the fit subjects of the first cunning tyrant who rises among you." --Abraham Lincoln, speech, September 11, 1858