haha check

You come to me wit wack-ass lyrics like that and see what happens you'll get slapped//
I'ma make ya shit yourself when u read this spit you'll be one one more rapper i capped//
Take off your hats Tha Remix is about to mix up your face and confuse your brain//
I'm tha big dogg of this rap game you like a fuckin poodle and i be tha great dane//
You must be insane fuckin' out of your mind you ain't got tha skills dogg u ain't got tha rhymes//
Now it's merking time i ain't even gotta try it ain't that hard battlin' this newbie guy//
I'm only on my 7th line and u can't believe ya eyes but i know u can't be surprised//
You stepped to me i'm a lyrical king and if someone told u that u had a chance then they must've been high//
But keep up head and try to elevate i'm not tryin' to hate i'm just tryin' to say//
Check your work and take criticsm work on it everyday and maybe you'll be as good as me someday// haha maybe not!

good luck

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation