This was intriguing. Though had it's off points, i was in more ways encapsulated by it. I like these kind of pieces as well as more simpler ones. Kind of abstract in how you wrote it, covering the meaning and what is 'really' being said in cryptic construction of words.

At first i thought it was a 'stand back and look' commentary on the corrosion of society. Concentrating on the run down areas where men play women and when they get pregnant. They run. The life that comes from it enters and becomes part of the vicious circle. Along those lines...

Then i thought it was also maybe a more general commentary. You know, the same problems but in different levels of society, so varying in extremity. But especially concentrating on the fucked up parts and people.

Either way, that's what i got out of it. Was one of those pieces.

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