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Old 07-17-03, 12:45 AM   #3
A2Z
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^^this coming from a biter of D12 TWICE....

dawg i aint even read a line an a half and ill tell you why

you need to//
type all your raps like this//
from now on cuz its so much easier//
to read//

and dont put bars after every other words, it kills the flow...the first line should be like this:

Da kid drop prohetic flows to enlighten any titan or pathetic foes//
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