Shiznit's THoughts:
hmm...interesting. sorta kinda eminem shit when he sees this girl cheating on his ass....
but anyways...u made this piece unique by just using words that would just be enough for it. The imagery is quite good but the content made the whole piece kinda off...but that was good tho...
wait a second...u didnt really do this ...or did u??....oh my god...now thats a conspiracy...
nice read tho altho it was short....recreate this and it would be better trust me..
