^^agreed to mr varentao right there...
wait wait wait....just for a sec??? posted : 02 13 03
wow...i havent even existed on rb yet when this was posted but im glad that i gotta to see the edited version
....hehehe
wow....really wow...i mean reading this that u wrote a couple of months ago and reading ur pieces now....wow..u had it already in u and still improving and just like what rb says "elevating"..hehe
this one had a great variety of vocab usage. I mean the deep meaningful words lie behind a true artistic meaning by themselves. The powerful structure of this reformed the words to act like they were meant to be there...
The whole content of this piece gave such meaning that would make someone sit back and think about what if and whats gonna happen.. i felt a lot of emotions...
i liked it..i really do...especially the fact that it was written a long time ago and just edited now...hehehe
good job varentao