Shiznit's Thoughts:

very self explanatory...jsut the emotions thrown in it made this one called a piece.

the vocab usage and the flow never work together but the fact u tried to maintain it as it is its quite good..

the caps blinds ppl...seriously not a very appealing factor...cuz when u use caps many ppl would gone dizzy and just not read it at all..but oh well...it had an interesting theme..not at all bad

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