gangsta one

[Open]

Lil G's bouncy booby-bitch in his "profile"//
Dis niggaz so desperate he NEEDS anime porn to "smile"//
-lol..nice
Fuckin' peverse bitch, u make me "sick"//
U jus' a lucky nigga who made it smokin' "dick"...//
-coulda flipped dis better

[Mid]
Lil G tries to "mimic" ma ill "ryhmes", to be a REAL emcee is a "curse"//
Dis nigga's ryhmes r "lymrics" and mine r "nines", he is a pussy compared to me, a hospital "nurse"//
-good idea..but filler
The "Executives" are fuckin' homo ass-eatin' "pussies"//
Ma punches r "Destructive" u no match fo Nasty Young Gangstas aka "N.Y.G's"//
-filler..
"Mars"-advanced "verses" leave "scars" on yo "face"//
"Scars"-deepenin', "curses" playin' "cards" on u, u a "disgrace"//
-decent shit..gettin there
Ma "ryhmes" r illegal, yet pigs are to scared to face "me"//
Ma "nines" r illegal, but u jus' a wannabe, a FAKE "emcee"!//
-not really a punch..but ur rhyme scheme is smooth
[Close]
Nex' time u fuck wit a N.I.G.G.A from da N.Y.G//
Make sho u lyrically, verbally, and mentally ready!//
-coulda been flipped 2 be a killer..but just an average hit

Lil g

U think ya got game in hiphop? Here go play with ya vocal cords/
Im takin flight.. leave yall neckless behind like lil kim at the airport/
-good wordplay..decent hit
And there for Im robbin you.. becuz I still dont give a fuck son/
U so broke... how can I kick in ya door when ya house aint got none?/
-HA..nice
im the type of dude ya seein the streets poppin my guns/
you da type of faggot that go ta jail and drop the sope for fun/
-kinda played concept but still a nice punch in my eyes
Check ya tempeture.. you claim to have a fever but you aint sick/
Ight Ill admit that u’re ill... but I dont want no seizures on my dick/
-HAHA..nice shit
Ill make u fall & stop so dont get up.. after this battle better call the cops/
U hittin puberty is like a lottery.. Becuz we still waitin for the balls to drop/
-DAMN
All of your verses remind me of slope skiing... cuz they keep on goin-down-hill’’/
Scared so ur throwin-down-pills cuz after this ya wont hold the flowin-crown-still/
-flowin crown still..forced multis..but good idea
need alotta luck dawg... so I’m imagining that’s why you tend to write on clovers/
U live for internet rapping and u just got beat so I guess that means your life is OVER/
-i can swear ive seen this line before..or sumthin like it..u mighta flipped the idea..but ill do my research

vote-Lil G
for an all around consistangt verse and good flow n punches..gangsta had one nice hit opposed 2 5 nice hits..