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Old 07-17-03, 10:01 PM   #11
Genetikz
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ok ok dis was tight kinda like da battle of da master n under dawg,,, southern u came short n basic, their was nothin in yo verse that really stood out na mean, i was lookin to read somin that maybe wouldent get a laugth or a OOHHHH but just a smile, failed, flow was off but hey dis is a battle n fuck flow, ya best bar was da r kelly bar..

stealth ya shit was ok again no flow, wordplay was basic n the 1st 2 lines could kill u in many emcees eyes they where pure whackness fosure, HOWEVER id did get better n culminated in these bars----I should charge a LATE FEE cause you fail to RETURN In the LINES/
You comin with punches but im coming with BLOCK BUSTER ability/
Your just another RENTAL only viewed temporarily......

specially those last 2 and the way u constructed the 1st to lead into the last, IMO thats what took dis battle.

vote= stealth (just)