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^^don't be like that,^^
Rhyming/Flow
Flow Was Non-EXistant, RHymings Was ALMOST Non-Existant, You Had A Few Words That Sort Of Rhymed: "HIGH", n' "Die".....Up You Flow With Multi's, Although I THought THis Bar Was Ok: " feel like i got butterflies, up in my stomach// the weed leaves me capable to die, but i still love it//"....2/10
Vocab/Wordplay
You have A Decent Amount Of Vocab, Well I Say Decent! Up It, Read The Dictionary Or Something....2/10
Concept/Topic
Couldn't Really See A Topioc That You Stayed ON, Elevate This..1/10
Overall
Elevate On The Following: - Flow (Learn About mUlti's)
- Vocab (Expand It)
-Topic (Pick A Topic That You Can relate To)
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