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Old 07-18-03, 05:35 PM   #13
Da NFamous
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Originally posted by varentao
It was a here and there. Most probably because you wrote it in such a personal way. And it was so short.

Nonetheless, for the short piece it was, the emotions came out well enough.

I could see how from a personal point of view it would seem a compressed piece of emotions in a layed back manner. But from an outsiders point of view, it's quite loose...

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i agree when i started diggin it stopped, also u may think that because u know what the emotions mean it was enough but everynoe else needs to decypher your meaning, make it a little longer but not a novel, i like overall 1luv.
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