wow...i am very amazed at these writings. Its incredible knowing for a fact that some people could actually reconstruct my views in writing and making me realize how wonderful words and ideas out there waiting for then to combined in such thing that they would make sense not only to yourself but to everyone.

BRIBEONE
>uve made ur piece somewhat quite interesting by using terms that actually refresh with the whole theme. You've thrown out a couple of deep extracted words here and there that made the content of this stood out.
>The whole idea of looking at another person's perspective added a bit and surely enhanced most parts.

SUREAL
>i am very speechless. Starting from the intro..u really did make this piece equisite using ur creativity..the whole teaser intro made me read further down to the end. You're very choice of words and terminology recreated something from the whole structure to all throught out the refinement of each event.
>The whole idea of reflecting some true to life aspect of it and reinvisioned it with uniqueness helped the whole piece to stood out on its own.
>The content is quite simple but u made it soooo incredible when u added excitement to it ..just like watching a movie...its very suspenseful and ur soooo curious of whats gonna happened next..its brilliant!..and of course the very ending surpassed everything and that made me like it sooo much.

...>very nice pieces from you guys...it was worth the time reading. both came really hard that made it difficult for me to execute my decision but it came across to me that i can only vote one..good job guys!

VOTE: Sureal

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